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Shot from the Japanese Gardens In Rockhampton

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Shot from the Japanese Gardens In Rockhampton

Postby MATT on Mon Jan 10, 2005 10:05 pm

Here is shot from the japanese gardens using kit lense hand held, a little photoshop for help.

http://matt4004.fotopic.net/p10646615.html

I think it may be to busy? Tell me what you think.

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Postby JordanP on Mon Jan 10, 2005 10:11 pm

Hi Matt,

I like the image. While it is busy I didn't find it too distracting. Also liked the good use of foreground to help frame the shot.

It would be interesting to catch another shot like this but with a longer time exposure (always nice on waterfalls).
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Postby sirhc55 on Mon Jan 10, 2005 10:29 pm

I like it Matt - a softening and pastel action would make it almost like a Japanese print

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Postby skippy on Tue Jan 11, 2005 1:12 am

Nice. Colour came out well. Can't seem to see it full size though, it only looks like it's about 300 x 400.
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Postby Raydar on Tue Jan 11, 2005 6:13 am

I’m with JP

A little longer shutter speed to highlight the water & you have a winner 8)

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Postby bago100 on Tue Jan 11, 2005 7:57 am

I would like to see the same photo with a tighter waterfall crop and with a larger screen size.

Apart from that, not a bad photo at all with the kit lens Matt :D

Keep posting

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Postby MATT on Tue Jan 11, 2005 2:07 pm

Thanks , I will try the long shutter time . I didnt have my tripod with at the time.

I tried the crop but didnt turn ou to good

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Postby Killakoala on Tue Jan 11, 2005 8:06 pm

Looks great the way it is i reckon. Nice exposure.
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