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Leaf with 50mm 1.4

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Leaf with 50mm 1.4

Postby Geoff on Wed Jan 19, 2005 9:33 pm

Just another photo? I liked it and thought I'd post, it's been a while... been busy setting up my business :). Critiques welcome...

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Thanx to Birdy too for my 2nd D70 body too, which I purchased today from him! :)
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Postby atencati on Thu Jan 20, 2005 5:34 am

DOF seems a bit short, the bottom of the leaf is soft.

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Postby Greg B on Thu Jan 20, 2005 6:36 am

I might leaf this one alone. :wink:

So you got a second body, luxury...

Nice photo, I agree with andy re the dof, but otherwise good stuff.
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Postby Geoff on Thu Jan 20, 2005 9:19 am

Greg B wrote:I might leaf this one alone. :wink:

So you got a second body, luxury...

Nice photo, I agree with andy re the dof, but otherwise good stuff.


Leaf it alone...mwahahahahahahahahahahaha :)
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Postby Neeper on Thu Jan 20, 2005 7:02 pm

Sorry for this question that has nothing to do with the picture... why would you need 2 bodies? I am just curious. I understand why you would with film.
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Postby phillipb on Thu Jan 20, 2005 7:15 pm

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Postby birddog114 on Thu Jan 20, 2005 7:17 pm

phillipb wrote:In case one breaks down during a paid photoshoot.


- have two difference focal lenses on each body, instead of swap lens.
- can be used by the assistance to capture some missing opportunity.
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Postby dooda on Thu Jan 20, 2005 7:51 pm

My eye can't figure out where to go in this photo (lines coming both at me and away from me, and the subject is half out of focus (the front leaf). The stems and other leaves are so out of focus it feels a little chaotic. DOF is way to shallow. I think that DOF should flow out of focus more gracefully on a plant that is connected to stems that ebbs away from us. Rule of thirds would have worked well here I think.

Okay so I'm going to post one now too so be sure to be just as harsh.
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