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			 by biggerry on Tue Apr 26, 2011 12:19 am
 Anzac Day is great day that never ceases to amaze me and fills me with a immense sense of respect for those left surviving from some of the crazy conflicts over the years. As it has for a number of years, the rain came down repeatedly but was not too heavy to deter most supporters and marchers, there were certainly less photographers out this year compared with last (from my POV). My aim for the day was to get a series of portrait style shots to use for a little project that I am working on, the following are a couple that jumped out at me, critique more than welcome and also alternate PP suggestions welcome. (5 images here, no point in thread spamming for that one extra picture    )      
			
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			 by Raskill on Tue Apr 26, 2011 1:09 am
 Fantastic shots! All of them. 2x D700, 2x D2h, lenses, speedlights, studio, pelican cases, tripods, monopods, patridges, pear trees etc etc  http://www.awbphotos.com.au 
			
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			 by Remorhaz on Tue Apr 26, 2011 9:33 am
 They are all fantastic images, for me the last is probably the weakest but they are all still great. Looks like you had very nice (overcast) light for this. If I had to pick one it might be the first or your POTW (congrats   ) - and since they are all such outstanding and evocative images, for me if you posted the more I'd be happy to see them. A little query - were these taken with the 300/4?D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro SticksRodney - My Photo BlogWant: Fast Wide (14|20|24) 
			
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			 by surenj on Tue Apr 26, 2011 10:39 am
 #2 is classic. The expression, framing and softlight etc creates a sombre yet uplifting mood!     I can only see a few suggestions for improvement if any #3 The face on the upper left could be cloned #4 Little bit on the dark side so it's hard to see the third person in shadow. #5 Maybe a little cropping from the right? Great light on these and I remember the light was the same last year! 
			
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			 by aim54x on Tue Apr 26, 2011 10:40 am
 Damn you and your 300mm!!! Excellent shots Gerry! CameronNikon F/Nikon 1 | Hasselblad V/XPAN| Leica M/LTM |Sony α/FE/E/Maxxum/M42Wishlist Nikkor 24/85 f/1.4| Fuji Natura BlackScout-Images | Flickr | 365Project 
			
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			 by surenj on Tue Apr 26, 2011 1:08 pm
 aim54x wrote:Excellent shots Gerry!
 Speaking of which, I reckon with your recent form (and previous form), you could open an exhibition of the likes. I reckon you'd have enough for a Anzac day exhibition!!     or Macro....or Landscape...    
			
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			 by surenj on Tue Apr 26, 2011 1:09 pm
 Also consider cropping the boy image from the top a little. 
			
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			 by sirhc55 on Tue Apr 26, 2011 1:53 pm
 These are excellent Gerry - can’t wait for next year  Chris--------------------------------
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			 by gstark on Tue Apr 26, 2011 3:15 pm
 Gerry,
 Great images; great use of Depth of Field.
 
 I love the second, and I also think that the fourth of these is very strong; there's a story in this image that just screams ANZAC. That has to be my favourite.
 
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			 by dervish16 on Tue Apr 26, 2011 4:20 pm
 Love these shots Gerry. I like # 1 and 2 the most. 
			
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			 by Mal on Tue Apr 26, 2011 7:35 pm
 Love them all, but favourites would have to be 2 and 3. As mentioned would love to know the story behind number 2 and would love to listen to the stories from number 3.
 Many, many years ago I spent some time at the War Vets hospital in Sydney, I just loved sitting with the old men and listening to their stories, wished I was into photography back then!
 
 Again, great photos would love to see more!!!!
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			 by Geoff on Wed Apr 27, 2011 3:31 am
 Gerry - you're series is fantastic. Love them.
 I also agree that the last image is the weakest, but in a series so strong that should be water off a duck's back! Well done.
 
			
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			 by radar on Wed Apr 27, 2011 9:52 am
 Great series Gerry, well done, also love the way you used the DOF. Photography, as a powerful medium of expression and communications, offers an infinite variety of perception, interpretation and execution. Ansel Adams
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			 by Elver on Wed Apr 27, 2011 10:36 am
 Yes, fantastic series representing young and old, men and women paying their respects. Well done, Gerry. EOS 5D MkII, 70-200mm f/2.8LIS, 24-70mm f/2.8LIS, 50mm f/1.2, 18-200mm f3.5-5.6 IS, 580EX II 
			
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			 by colin_12 on Wed Apr 27, 2011 10:52 pm
 I also like your use of depth in these Gerry   Regards ColinCameras, lenses and a lust for life
 
			
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			 by biggerry on Fri Apr 29, 2011 2:57 pm
 Remorhaz wrote:A little query - were these taken with the 300/4?
 aim54x wrote:Damn you and your 300mm!!! Excellent shots Gerry!
 yep, all taken with the 300mm afs f/4, this lens has contrast and sharpness only second to my 105mm f/2.5, its a real pleasure to use. Remorhaz wrote:Looks like you had very nice (overcast) light for this.
 yep, as it was last year, cloudy and raining, makes for some very nice soft diffused light - the worlds biggest softbox     surenj wrote:#2 is classic. The expression, framing and softlight etc creates a sombre yet uplifting mood!I can only see a few suggestions for improvement if any
 #3 The face on the upper left could be cloned
 #4 Little bit on the dark side so it's hard to see the third person in shadow.
 #5 Maybe a little cropping from the right?
 Great light on these and I remember the light was the same last year!
 thanks suren, all good suggestions and have made it into the second round of edits     sirhc55 wrote:These are excellent Gerry - can’t wait for next year 
 Its always a pleasure  and humbling experience to see the marches and with some luck I will be there again next year - thanks Chris. gstark wrote:the fourth of these is very strong; there's a story in this image that just screams ANZAC. That has to be my favourite.
 truth be know I also really like this shot, I think it could also work in BW, it gives a real sense of young servicemen heading off or coming home from some tour. Mal wrote:Many, many years ago I spent some time at the War Vets hospital in Sydney, I just loved sitting with the old men and listening to their stories, wished I was into photography back then!
 that would have been a great experience and privilage! Remorhaz wrote:if you posted the more I'd be happy to see them
 Mal wrote:Again, great photos would love to see more!!!!
 I have about 200 decent ones from the day all of similiar style, I will try and sort thru a few more and see what jumps out at me     Cheers to everyone for the feedback. 
			
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			 by Matt. K on Sun May 01, 2011 11:28 pm
 GerryYou are becoming a very skilled photographer. These images are superb! The last is the weakest and would have been better if he had turned his face to the camera. Bloody good job!
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			 by biggerry on Sat May 07, 2011 4:25 pm
 Matt. K wrote:GerryYou are becoming a very skilled photographer. These images are superb! The last is the weakest and would have been better if he had turned his face to the camera. Bloody good job!
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			 by biggerry on Sun May 15, 2011 12:50 am
 If you want to see more, I have generated a quick gallery of all the images from the day - there are quite a few there, nearly 200 so be prepared.Gerrys' Anzac Day 2011 
			
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