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				Darwin Sunsets
				
Posted: 
Sun Oct 16, 2011 10:05 amby Wink
				Sunset is popular at Mindal Beach (edited)...

Dripstone Beach...


Tried to make use of the reflection...

 
			
		
			
				Re: Darwin Sunsets
				
Posted: 
Sun Oct 16, 2011 10:35 amby Remorhaz
				Hi Adam,
#1 is nice but I reckon there's not quite enough silhouetting going on and perhaps if you cropped about 2/3'ds of the black at the bottom it would also make the shapes of the people stand out more.
I like the clouds and sky in #3 and it really pops but the land/beach just seems too dull. NB: the horizon seems to noticably curve and tilt to the right on this one too I think. Possibly the top half of #3 with the bottom half of #4 would have been very nice 

 
			
		
			
				Re: Darwin Sunsets
				
Posted: 
Sun Oct 16, 2011 10:59 amby Wink
				Thanks for the suggestion. I've updated the image.
I also upped the brightness a little to help the silhouettes stand out a bit more.
			 
			
		
			
				Re: Darwin Sunsets
				
Posted: 
Sun Oct 16, 2011 6:10 pmby aim54x
				These look great!!
			 
			
		
			
				Re: Darwin Sunsets
				
Posted: 
Sun Oct 16, 2011 6:20 pmby surenj
				#2 especially suited for a brochure of the sorts..  

 
			
		
			
				Re: Darwin Sunsets
				
Posted: 
Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:01 pmby biggerry
				Wink wrote:Dripstone Beach...
This one i really like, it challenges the normal composition rules (for a seascape) and simply just works in my books. That said the placement of the sun and the clouds within the frame really make it a strong image.
Dialling down your watermark may also help, i feel it draws the eye too much.
 
			
		
			
				Re: Darwin Sunsets
				
Posted: 
Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:10 pmby Wink
				Thanks Gerry.
I think I did a better job with the HDR on these. It darkens a little around some of the clouds, but I don't think it looks out of place.
			 
			
		
			
				Re: Darwin Sunsets
				
Posted: 
Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:15 pmby surenj
				Hey Adam, Did you HDR #2? I wouldn't have thought it would be necessary?
			 
			
		
			
				Darwin Sunsets
				
Posted: 
Wed Oct 19, 2011 10:48 pmby Wink
				2, 3 and 4 are HDR. In saying that though they're done on quite a low tone compression.
I'll post the 0EV shot of #2 tomorrow afternoon for you to look at.
You're quite possibly right. I just liked the look I got from it.
			 
			
		
			
				Re: Darwin Sunsets
				
Posted: 
Thu Oct 20, 2011 10:16 amby norwest
				I like the 2nd image for it's simplicity and mellow mood created by the cloud form. I'd perhaps crop a little off the top.
			 
			
		
			
				Re: Darwin Sunsets
				
Posted: 
Thu Oct 20, 2011 7:14 pmby zafra52
				2nd and last are the best in my book.
I love the colours and crispiness of the
images.
			 
			
		
			
				Re: Darwin Sunsets
				
Posted: 
Thu Oct 20, 2011 8:44 pmby Wink
				Thanks guys.
surenj wrote:Hey Adam, Did you HDR #2? I wouldn't have thought it would be necessary?
Here's the 0EV shot of #2...

 
			
		
			
				Re: Darwin Sunsets
				
Posted: 
Fri Oct 21, 2011 7:29 pmby zafra52
				Sorry, Nope! The first version works
better for me.